Question

• Is your sidebar organized and have your visited all of your classmates blogs at least once? If not, explain why, if so, give your impression.

Yes.

• Have you labeled all your book reviews and essays?

Yes, I have.

• Does your blog include pictures and/or videos?

Yes, it is.

• What is your best post? Why? (please also link to it)

April 23 is my best post.
Because

• What is your best book review? Why? (please link to it)

Book Review-1 is best post.

• What are the good points and bad points about this writing class?



• (3rd year+ students only) What problems are you having in class? What can I (Mr Tomei) do to help you?

Book Review 1-01

GUCCI-Business in Fashion-
*Introduction
*Why did you choose this book?
Because I know this brand and I like.
*What was interesting about it?
I was interested in why this brand-name goods is very expensive.
*Summary of the story
Gucci is famous around the world for beautiful and expensive clothes and other products.
The company started in 1921 with one small store in Italy. Today, There are Gucci stores in many of the world‘s large cities. Gucci makes and sells clothes, handbags, luggage, and many other things.
This is the story of the Gucci family and their famous company. The Gucci are very interesting family. They made Gucci a success after many years of hard work, and the company made Italian design and fashion famous around the world.
The Gucci family had problems, too, and the famous company is not their now. But the new bosses made Gucci number one in world fashion again.
*Conclusion
*Do you recommend this book? Why?
Yes, because I was interested in this brand before. So I could know a lot of things about this brand. And I love Gucci more than before. I wanted this brand-name wallet. I will buy it after I will earn money. I should work more.

Essay 4/ A memorable day in my life

My memorable day is good-by day to my host mothers. When I was second grade student at university, I went to America to stay with a family for a month. I was adopted two young women. Their name is Hilary and Stacey. At first, I was tensed up. So I couldn’t talk well with them. And I couldn’t hear well their English. I was introduced to various people. It was their parents, brothers, sisters and friends and so on. People are all very kind to me. I was glad. We went to various places. For example, restaurant, shopping mall, their parent’s houses and so on. I could enjoy every day. As time goes by, I became to speak well. But time was getting on; the last day had come without notice. Thank them very much. I can’t thank you enough. I was very sad when I had to come back from America to Japan. I wrote a letter for Hilary and Stacey. I gave it to them. But I said “Please don’t read it here.”, because I was a little ashamed and I think that probably I would cry. I would not cry the occasion. I want to say “Good-by” with smile. But it was impossible. When it comes to the point, I cried. They cried too. I didn’t want to go to Japan. I cried out after a long separation. I will go to America again.
I will go to America with my friends as graduation travel next year.
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Book review-o7

Robin food is the very good boy. He is brave and manly. I didn’t know about Robin Hood until I read this book. I can be get well. I thought I want to get a husband as Robin Hood. He experienced a lot of fights. I don’t like fight. But I thought fighters are very cool. He lived in forest. He was an evil a wrong doer. But his heart is very clear. This story is superstition. It was wonderful for me. I thought this story is resemble Peter pan. It was very interesting for me. I want to read this book again. <103 words>